It was just hard for me to tell, but I guess the two middle ones are the returns?
Maybe just go with one large gate valve before your 2:1 split on the return? The problem I see with the paired ball valves currently is adjusting one down will result in more back pressure & flow hitting the other, making it a seesaw game to adjust the pair. Throttling directly off the pump will give you more control of the overall flow into the tank.
Then its just a matter of adjusting the gate valve to make the flow balanced with the return volume to keep your water level where you want it in the display tank.
I just went through this with installing a sump on my 180G - I went the dual pump/gate valve/return route with smaller pumps. And found out my "smaller" is too much with both full throttle and I was out running my drain lines! I too could not resist bumping up my pump size, so now I'm running with just one on.
